Audience feedback from ideas pitch

Today, I pitched my music video ideas to my class mates, and they all provided feedback for each idea, explaining any parts they liked, and any parts which they felt needed changing or altering in any way. 

Here is a picture of me presenting my ideas:

Here is a video of the class discussion, which contains crucial information which I can study to help to improve my ideas and expand further.

A re-occuring theme in the feedback video is the fact that people like my 'child gang' idea, but there is a big logistical problem about finding enough available kids to use, and for having them for a long period of time. 

Additionally, classmates also provided some key information regarding music videos I should watch as they contain elements in them which I want to have in my video. One example was Cheating by John Newman. I spoke about having a band playing on a rooftop, and in this video there is that exact thing. I checked it out and it was very useful, as it provided me with inspiration towards a possible idea which I would love to see be created. 

Another suggestion was to use paintball guns instead of my original Nerf gun idea. I think this is a fantastic suggestion as paintball guns would create a much more visually appealing video, as we could use many different coloured paints. I will definitely consider this idea and I think it would be amazing to bring this to life. Additionally, access to this equipment would be a lot easier than getting multiple Nerf guns.